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| Amoore Senior Member Denmark Joined 5770 days ago 177 posts - 218 votes  Speaks: Danish* | Message 17 of 86 06 October 2009 at 12:16am | IP Logged | |||||
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Short update:
Grammar is so very interesting.. no sarcasm here. It really is, and i am surprised, cus' grammar in Danish makes me want to zzzzz... zzzzz... sorry. Danish grammar is so zzzz... zzzzzzzzzzzzzzz.. Reading 183 p. grammar book. Edited by Amoore on 06 October 2009 at 12:19am 1 person has voted this message useful | ||||||
| Amoore Senior Member Denmark Joined 5770 days ago 177 posts - 218 votes Speaks: Danish* | Message 18 of 86 07 October 2009 at 1:14am | IP Logged | |||||
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Update:
Basic grammar done. I have to do some repetition. I now have a complete wordlist for Albă ca zapada and have translated it - or at least tried to. But i understood minimum 85% of it. And i learned a lesson. DO NOT TRANSLATE FAIRY TALES as your first text! They are usually in the past tense... -.- so veeeeery annoying when you'r only learning the basic grammar. Tomorrow I will look at the biblia pentru copii - the bible for kids. Hopefully the grammar is more newbie-friendly. Goodnight from denmark 01:08 in the morning. 1 person has voted this message useful | ||||||
| Amoore Senior Member Denmark Joined 5770 days ago 177 posts - 218 votes Speaks: Danish* | Message 19 of 86 10 October 2009 at 10:30pm | IP Logged | |||||
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Today I read the first page of "Biblia pentru copii", The bible for kids, I bought in Romania, and translated it into Danish. I guess most of you don't speak Danish that well - but I would like some response anyway - so I made another one i English, but it kinda' suck I believe.
This is my first "real" translation so please feel free to beat me up for bad grammar, literally (just in case som nutcase reads this), so I can learn more. Here we go: Istoria poporului lui Dumnezeu Vechiul testament Începem cu începutul înainte de a fi fost creată lumea. La început a fost doar Dumnezeu. El a creat lumea şi tot ce există în ea. El i-a creat pe primii oameni, iar cănd lucrurile au început să se îndrepte spre rău, El a pregătit un plan de salvare a lor, Dumnezeu a ales un om, şi prin el, un popor, şi din acest popor s-a născut Mântuitorul lumii. Biblia conţine o colecţie impresionantă de istorisiri. Ea rămâne, totuşi, o singură carte. Guds folks historie Gamle testamente Vi begynder med begyndelsen før jorden var skabt. I begyndelsen var kun Gud Han skabte jorden og alt hvad findes på den. Han skabte det første menneske, men tingene begyndte at begynde at gå dårligt, Han forberedte en frelsesplan for dem. Gud udvalgte et menneske, og gennem ham, et folk, og fra det folk fødtes verdenens Frelser Biblen indeholder en samling af imponerende beretninger. De forbliver, ikke desto mindre, i en eneste bog. Gods peoples story Old testament. We begin with the beginning before the earth was created. I the beginning was only God. He created the earth and all which can be found on it. He created the first human, but the things started to start to go bad, He prepared a plan of salvation for them. God choose a man, and through him, a people, and from this people the saviour of the world was born. The bibel contains a collection of impressive stories. They remain, none the less, in one single book. Edited by Amoore on 10 October 2009 at 10:35pm 1 person has voted this message useful | ||||||
| Amoore Senior Member Denmark Joined 5770 days ago 177 posts - 218 votes Speaks: Danish* | Message 20 of 86 12 October 2009 at 12:54am | IP Logged | |||||
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Aaaanother translation in Romanian, Danish and English. Please fell very free to correct anything! ;-)
This sentence could need som help in the translations: Dumnezeu a privit în jur la tot ceea ce a creat şi a văzut câ toate erau foarte bune. La început... Demult, la începutul tuturor lucrurilor, Dumnezeu a creat lumea nostră. El a făcut soarele, pentru a lumina ziua, luna şi stelele nopţii. El a făcut cerul, pămăntul şi marea. Dumnezeu a făcut păsările cerului, peştii care înoată în ape şi animalele de pe uscat. Apoi, Dumnezeu a privit în jur la tot ceea ce a creat şi a văzut câ toate erau foarte bune. Lumea era pregătită oameni, aşa ca, după ce a creat totul, Dumnezeu i-a creat şi pe ei, pe Adam, pe Eva, primul bărbat şi prima femeie. Først, i alle tings begyndelse, Gud skabte vores jord. Han skabte solen, for at lyse dagen, månen og stjernerne nætterne. Han lavede himlen, landet og havet. Gud lavede himmelens fugle, fiskene som svømmer i vand og dyrerne på det tørre land. Derefter, Gud så i omgivelser på alt det hvad han skabte og så at alt det var meget godt. Jorden den var forberedt mennesker, så, efter alt var skabt, skabte Gud dem, Adam, Eva, den første mand og første kvinde. Beføre, in the beginning of all things, God created our earth. He created the sun, to shine/light up the day, the moon and the stars the nights. He created the sky, the land and the sea. God made the birds and the sky, the fishes that swims in water and the animals on the dry land. Then, God saw in surroundings on all which he created and saw that alt it was very good. The earth it was prepared for humans, so , after all was created, God created them, Adam, Eva, the first man and the first woman. And thats it. Not the best - but it is my 2. go at translating. :) Edited by Amoore on 12 October 2009 at 12:59am 1 person has voted this message useful | ||||||
| Amoore Senior Member Denmark Joined 5770 days ago 177 posts - 218 votes Speaks: Danish* | Message 21 of 86 12 October 2009 at 12:49pm | IP Logged | |||||
How do I translate?
I sure hope this will work for me... I see my improvement already, but I'm just wondering: Is there a better way? Edited by Amoore on 12 October 2009 at 12:51pm 1 person has voted this message useful | ||||||
 Iversen Super Polyglot Moderator Denmark berejst.dk Joined 6703 days ago 9078 posts - 16473 votes Speaks: Danish*, French, English, German, Italian, Spanish, Portuguese, Dutch, Swedish, Esperanto, Romanian, Catalan Studies: Afrikaans, Greek, Norwegian, Russian, Serbian, Icelandic, Latin, Irish, Lowland Scots, Indonesian, Polish, Croatian Personal Language Map | Message 22 of 86 12 October 2009 at 2:26pm | IP Logged | |||||
han skabte de første mennesker (pluralis) Den (biblen) forbliver imidlertid én bog
Vorherre kiggede omkring sig på alt som han havde skabt, og han så at alt var såre godt. Verden [ikke jorden] var parat til menneskene, således at Vorherre, efter at have* skabt* alting, OGSÅ skabte dem: den første mand og den første kvinde. * Here Romanian uses a compound perfect, where Danish uses a plusquamperfectum or - as here - a construction with an infinitive However these things are all small details, - your translation is generally good (but there are a few minor errors in the English version) Edited by Iversen on 12 October 2009 at 5:07pm 2 persons have voted this message useful | ||||||
| Amoore Senior Member Denmark Joined 5770 days ago 177 posts - 218 votes Speaks: Danish* | Message 23 of 86 12 October 2009 at 4:31pm | IP Logged | |||||
This one really bugged me. Thank you so much.
But important small details - Thanks you for helping me out, again. :) It was really useful and I appreciate it. 1 person has voted this message useful | ||||||
| Amoore Senior Member Denmark Joined 5770 days ago 177 posts - 218 votes Speaks: Danish* | Message 24 of 86 12 October 2009 at 10:35pm | IP Logged | |||||
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This one took forever. I have been sitting here from 19:10, and now it is 22:25, translating this, and it is not that good - I did some guessing. But it was great fun :)
I'm wasting so much time these (holi)days, and it's a shame. So I'll do something about it and go make some flashcards - now! Here's my translation. Feel free to use it, correct it - or/and even better, give me some response ;-) La început, 2... Dumnezeu le-a încredenţat lumea, să îngrijească de plante şi copaci, af păsări, de peşti şi de toate celelalte animale. Le-a dăriut şi un loc minuntat în care să trăiască. Acolo curgeau râuri răcoroase şi creşteau copaci umbroşi plini de fructe bune de mâncat. Locul, frumos ca o grădină, s-a numit Eden. Gud betroede dem verden(thank you Iversen), for at tage sig af planter og træer, af fugle, af fisk og af alle de andre dyr. De fik også skænket et fantastisk sted som de skulle leve. Der løb forfriskende floder og voksede skyggegivende træer fulde af god frugt at spise. Stedet, smuk som en have, hed Eden. God trusted them with the world (thank you Iversen), to take care of plants and trees, of birds, of fish and of all the other animals. They were also granted a fantastic place where they should live. There refreshing rivers ran and shading trees was growing, full of good fruit to eat. The place, beautiful as a garden, was called Eden. Edited by Amoore on 13 October 2009 at 12:35am 1 person has voted this message useful |
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