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chenshujian
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09 May 2012 at 10:28am | IP Logged 
Suppose I am writing a letter to another company, proposing for a meeting between our president Mr. Xu and their president Mr. Yao. And our company name is AAA.

There are two ways of writing this letter:

1) Company to Person

Dear Mr. Yao,

To enhance our cooperation, Mr. Xu, on behave of AAA, will meet you on Friday for further discussion.
Thank you.

Yours sincerely

AAA

2) Person to Person

Dear Mr. Yao,

To enhance our cooperation, I, on behave of AAA, will meet you on Friday for further discussion.
Thank you.

Yours sincerely

Xu
President of AAA


My question is, 2) is quite a common way of composing such letter. But what about 1)? Is it also an acceptable way?




Edited by chenshujian on 18 May 2012 at 10:50am

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09 May 2012 at 8:12pm | IP Logged 
1) Would never be used. The letter would always be from a person on behalf of the company.
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Hekje
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09 May 2012 at 11:38pm | IP Logged 
Seconding genini1. Also, not to be nit-picky, but it's not "on behave" - it's "on
behalf". I hope it's not too rude to mention. :)

Edited by Hekje on 09 May 2012 at 11:38pm

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chenshujian
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10 May 2012 at 2:59am | IP Logged 
Hekje wrote:
Seconding genini1. Also, not to be nit-picky, but it's not "on behave" - it's "on
behalf". I hope it's not too rude to mention. :)


It is nice for you to notice and correct my mistake. Thanks :)


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