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newyorkeric
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 Message 17 of 19
01 February 2010 at 4:39am | IP Logged 
Please tone it done and keep it on topic (the Esperanto profile). There are already a number of other threads on the usefulness and culture of Esperanto that you are free to contribute to if you have something to say about those topics.

Edited by newyorkeric on 01 February 2010 at 4:40am

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Chung
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 Message 18 of 19
01 February 2010 at 6:09am | IP Logged 
zooplah wrote:
Chung wrote:
there is a tendency in languages which permit variable word order outside poetic contexts to use this flexibility to express changes in emphasis

Exactly. The meaning of a sentence doesn't change; it's just the most important aspect of it does:
Mi havas ruĝan aŭton. = I have a red car.
Mi havas aŭton ruĝan. = I have a car, which is, incidentally, red.
Ruĝan aŭton mi havas. = I have a red car (the car is the most important aspect; having it is the least).

Chung wrote:
or even changes in voice (i.e. active vs. passive).

Esperanto has different morphemes for that:
ant = present active
at = present passive
int = past active
it = past passive
ont = future active
ot = future passive

I like this arrangement because:
1) It follows the same pattern as the present indicative, so it's easy to remember.
2) It spares you from have two different auxiliary verbs used (English be/have; German sein/haben; Spanish estar/haber).

Chung wrote:
THE computer is on the table. ~ Tietokone on pöydällä. (Finnish)
There is A computer on the table. ~ Pöydällä on tietokone. (Finnish)

La komputilo estas sur la tablo.
Ekzistas komputilo sur la tablo.


If you look closely at the Finnish examples, the only difference between the two is word order. Yet on the strength of this change, Finns make a detectable distinction in the definiteness of "tietokone" and even the sense of the sentence changes (as seen in the translations into English). The Esperanto examples change not only the word order, but also the verb ("estas" vs. "ekzistas") and article ("la" vs. (no article)).

zooplah wrote:
Chung wrote:
As a side note, the idea that this flexibility is exploited even outside poetry by Esperantists to make Esperanto's word order match the word order of their native language also seems odd.

It's used when beginning Esperanto, to help you understand it better, before you learn how to change things for emphasis. You have to learn how to crawl before you can run.


I do not find this to be a helpful approach for learning ANY language, natural or not. By this logic, when I started learning Hungarian, I should then have been permitted to impose my native word orders when constructing similar sentences in Hungarian because I would have been still grammatically correct or conveying the same general meaning. As I showed in my post, Hungarian's flexible word order is used to express subtle rather than wholesale changes in meaning or emphasis. It's not to be used as a way to entice foreign learners to shape Hungarian word order in ways that are more familiar to those foreign learners. The result would be "un-Hungarian" word order with Hungarian words.

All the while, exploitation of Hungarian flexibility in word order to suit my native word order would have made me ignorant of the importance of Hungarian's flexible word order as used to express degrees of emphasis which English would express with changes in voice (i.e. active vs. passive), intonation / volume / stress (if speaking) or italics / bolding (in print). We definitely need learn to crawl before we walk (let alone run), but we shouldn't encourage bad habits when crawling.

It seems attractive (or may even evoke "warm fuzzies") when someone exploits a language with flexible word order as a selling point saying something like "See? X is great because you can use whichever word order you prefer and still be fully understood". However even a cursory look at the examples of Esperanto sentences shows that its word order is not as "free-spirited" as it appears. In this case different users can be generally understood by the same fluent Esperantist but there are different subtleties which that same Esperantist will take away.

Looking at the example of the red car:
zooplah wrote:
Mi havas ruĝan aŭton. = I have a red car.
Mi havas aŭton ruĝan. = I have a car, which is, incidentally, red.


Someone who's used to putting the adjective before the noun, will tend at first to do so in Esperanto. Someone who's used to putting adjectives after the noun, will likewise tend initially to use the same order in Esperanto. Beginners learning that it's OK to use whichever word order is more comfortable for them (i.e. closer to that of their native language) are relying on a crutch that turns them away from the fact that Esperanto word order actually is not a free-for-all and that some rules about word order exist in order to convey subtleties.

zooplah wrote:
Of course, it's not always possible. You can't translate "I can't do that"; you'd have to say "I not can do that" ("Mi ne povas fari tion"). Similarly, you couldn't really translate something like "Se lo él dio a él" from Spanish because Esperanto doesn't have indirect-object pronouns. You'd normally say "Li donis al li ĝin" or to emphasize the receiving rather than the giving, "Li al li donis ĝin" or a number of other word orders (following the English word order "Li donis ĝin al li" would render the recipient unimportant).

When an Esperantist claims that word order doesn't change meaning, he means that it doesn't give it the opposite meaning: "A man bites a dog" and "A dog bites a man" are exact opposites, and changing the word order in Esperanto doesn't render it as the exact opposite; it only changes the most important part of what's being said.

Now, if German word order is important and it still has cases, then that's truly redundant. Everything I've read is that German is a V2 language and the utility of the accusative case is so that you can use SVO or OVS, but my actual knowledge of German is very low.


The relationship between the importance of word order and presence of cases is a non sequitur. A more accurate statement would concern a relationship between *rigidity* of word order and quantity of cases. The comment about redundancy in German because of the importance of word order and its use of 4 cases overlooks something that you yourself pointed out earlier with your examples of Esperanto sentences in differing word orders. Word order is important if not for broad meaning, then for other reasons such as poetic license, emphasis or changing of voice. Esperanto has 2 cases (if I remember correctly) and word order is important as shown in your examples. Word order in Finnish, Hungarian and Slovak (among many other languages) is also important if not for broad meaning, then for other, more subtle reasons. For the record Finnish, Hungarian and Slovak have 15, 18 and 6 cases respectively. I don't think that any serious linguist would say that these languages have redundancy by virtue of the importance assigned to word order together with the use of cases.

German is indeed a V2 language, but the example of "Dich liebe ich" is not a good one. In this case, it occurs rarely outside poetry or song-writing, and many teachers (or even native speakers) would often correct you perhaps even saying something like: "'Ich liebe dich' klingt besser." in line with a strict SVO sequence. However German's rule of V2 in declarative sentences does permit (or even encourage) something like the following:

Ich komme heute Abend nach Hause. vs. Heute Abend komme ich nach Hause.
(note that "heute Abend" is not an object but an adverb, and the flexbility here can be used either to reflect personal style, or slight change of emphasis)

However you as a beginner in German may already detect a difference in emphasis, despite the identity of the general meaning.
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 Message 19 of 19
01 February 2010 at 10:47pm | IP Logged 
Chung wrote:


If you look closely at the Finnish examples, the only difference between the two is word order. Yet on the strength of this change, Finns make a detectable distinction in the definiteness of "tietokone" and even the sense of the sentence changes (as seen in the translations into English). The Esperanto examples change not only the word order, but also the verb ("estas" vs. "ekzistas") and article ("la" vs. (no article)).

Morphemes are invariable in Esperanto (Esperanto is actually an isolating language, not an agglutinative one). So the morpheme est and the morpheme ekzist have different meanings. Both are intransitive, so you don't use the accusative.

[The invariability of morphemes and the isolating character of Esperanto were two of the reasons behind Ido; the fact that you say ebla (instead of posibla) and troaĵo (instead of exceso), among others, drove the elite francophones nuts. This is probably the most humorous overview of Ido: Blueprints for Babel: Ido]

Chung wrote:
a selling point saying something like "See? X is great because you can use whichever word order you prefer and still be fully understood".

It's better than when learning German, and they tell you how similar it is to English, starting you off with a bunch of cognates. Then you get into grammar, and that's a total nightmare. I liked learning Esperanto because you started on the (very easy and minimal) grammar right away. The first thing you learn is verb conjugation, then forming the plurals and accusative case in Esperanto. I know English speakers hate the accusative case but don't mind the plural, where the Japanese are the other way around (because Japanese has the object particle o, which works similarly to Esperanto's bound morpheme n).

Chung wrote:
there are different subtleties which that same Esperantist will take away

And? In Fundamento de Esperanto, Zamenhof himself mentions that there are only two cases: nominative and accusative. The others are done with prepositions: de for the genitive, al for the dative, per for the instrumental, etc.

[Actually, Z uses kun instead of per in the English version, but not in a couple of the other versions, obviously because English doesn't differentiate between the two totally different concepts; we use "with" for both; of course, separating them comes in handy, as kunigi and perigi are totally different things.

He also says that "de" is used for replacing the genitive, but sometimes "da" is used. I remember one of the phrases I learned in German:
Ich möchte eine Tasse Tee.

In Esperanto that would be:
Mi volas tason da teo.]

In his book, Sylvan Zaft talks about the cost-benefit ratio. Some language features just have too high of a cost and too little of a benefit (like the Japanese verb system and the Indonesian second-person-pronoun system), so those features are lost.

Chung wrote:
Someone who's used to putting the adjective before the noun, will tend at first to do so in Esperanto. Someone who's used to putting adjectives after the noun, will likewise tend initially to use the same order in Esperanto.

Not really. It's customary to put adverbs before the words they qualify (except when you need to change it for emphasis). Like I put in the original post:
Mi povas bone paroli Esperanton. (I can well to speak Esperanto)
Mi hodiaŭ multe pli bone fartas. (I today much more well feel)

Chung wrote:
The relationship between the importance of word order and presence of cases is a non sequitur.

What use could the accusative case be if not for flexibility of expression? I know that in English, we still have it for pronouns (a merging of the dative and accusative cases, actually), but not for nouns.

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For the record Finnish, Hungarian and Slovak have 15, 18 and 6 cases respectively

As I understand it, Finno-Ugric languages like Finnish and Hungarian use cases primarily where we use prepositions. Also, the genitive case is still relatively important, because there's no way to tell if something's possessive by its position in the sentence. However, if you follow the template subject-indirect object-direct object, the presence of inflected forms for the dative and accusative cases become dead weight.

Chung wrote:
I don't think that any serious linguist would say that these languages have redundancy by virtue of the importance assigned to word order together with the use of cases.

One wouldn't think that a serious linguist would say things about a language that they know nothing about, but the fact that both dilettantes and professionals pass judgment on Esperanto without having even studied it shows that to not be the case.

Chung wrote:
note that "heute Abend" is not an object, but an adverb

Of course; it's like Esperanto's ĉi-vespere (note that you use a hyphen there to avoid confusing it with the correlatives that start with ĉi; for example, ĉiokaze and ĉi-okaze are totally different).

And as the moderator said, future arguments should be put into the appropriate threads. Arguing about this and that in Esperanto is both off-topic and over a century late.

Edited by zooplah on 01 February 2010 at 10:50pm



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