Sunja Diglot Senior Member Germany Joined 6085 days ago 2020 posts - 2295 votes 1 sounds Speaks: English*, German Studies: French, Mandarin
| Message 1 of 43 14 May 2008 at 3:16pm | IP Logged |
Would anybody like to participate in doing mini-sagas? A mini-saga is a short story of exactly 50 words.
I'm kind of inspired by Pauline's All Languages Forum to do this as a creative writing exercise. (Obviously the 50 words can be optional since languages are so different. It's only for those who like the extra challenge.)
I'll start out doing one in Spanish, which I've been learning for a few weeks, and then one in German which is more abstract. I'll add the English translation as well. I welcome any critique!
Estoy en un autobús en un país extranjero. Estoy sentado junto a una gran mujer y su perro. El conductor de autobús canta. Cantamos en voz alta. El sol brilla. El perro mira. Un hombre entre el autobús. Él lleva una camisa negro y un sombrero negro. El no canta.
(I am in a bus in a foreign country. I sit next to a large woman and her dog. The bus driver is singing. We all sing loudly. The sun is shining. The dog looks. A man gets in the bus. He wears a black shirt and a black hat. He is not singing.)
Wenn ich nicht zu spät ins bett gegangen wäre, dann hätte ich meinen Wecker nicht an die Wand geworfen. Gestern Abend war die Stimmung hoch. Tolles Abendessen und der perfekter Wein. Es wurde über alten Zeiten geplaudert. Eine Delle in die Wand und eine halbe Stunde später bin ich aufgestanden.
(If I hadn't gone to bed so late I wouldn't have thrown my alarm clock at the wall. The mood was high last night. A great meal and the perfect wine. (We) talked about old times. A small dent in the wall and half an hour later I got up.)
Edited by Sunja on 14 May 2008 at 3:31pm
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JW Hexaglot Senior Member United States youtube.com/user/egw Joined 6122 days ago 1802 posts - 2011 votes 22 sounds Speaks: English*, German, Spanish, Ancient Greek, French, Biblical Hebrew Studies: Luxembourgish, Dutch, Greek, Italian
| Message 3 of 43 14 May 2008 at 7:31pm | IP Logged |
O.K., I'll play. Can anyone guess the language?
Ech sinn doheim an meng Wunneng. Ech hunn vill honger. Ech iessen gär Brout an Ech drénke gär Bèier. Ech fuere mat mengem Auto an engem Restaurant. Ech bestellen Brout en Bèier. Ech iessen alles. Ech fuere mat mengem Auto doheim. Ech sinn nach eng kéier doheim an meng Wunneng.
I am home in my apartment. I am very hungry. I like to eat bread and I like to drink beer. I drive my car to a restaurant. I order bread and beer. I eat everything. I drive my car home. I am home again in my apartment.
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Darobat Diglot Senior Member Joined 7188 days ago 754 posts - 770 votes Speaks: English*, Russian Studies: Latin
| Message 4 of 43 14 May 2008 at 7:51pm | IP Logged |
Luxembourgish.
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bluejay390 Senior Member United StatesRegistered users can see my Skype Name Joined 6278 days ago 227 posts - 259 votes Speaks: English* Studies: Spanish, Mandarin, Japanese, Malay, Italian
| Message 5 of 43 14 May 2008 at 8:39pm | IP Logged |
This looks like fun! :D
Ia pukul lima pada pagi dan saya boleh mendengar burung-burung sedang nyanyian. Sepoi segar pagi rasa baik di muka saya. Saya tak nak bangun. Saya nak tidur tetapi saya tahu yang pagi akan melebur. Saya memaksa sendiri bangun dan bersedia untuk hari lagi.
It is five in the morning and I can hear birds singing. The cool morning breeze feels nice against my face. I don't want to wake up. I want to sleep but I know that the morning will fade away. I force myself to wake up and get ready for another day.
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Sunja Diglot Senior Member Germany Joined 6085 days ago 2020 posts - 2295 votes 1 sounds Speaks: English*, German Studies: French, Mandarin
| Message 6 of 43 15 May 2008 at 1:46am | IP Logged |
Pauline wrote:
Hi sunja,
what a great idea!!!
How have we to play this game? Sollen wir die Geschichten ein Stückchen weiter schreiben oder ganz neue anfangen? |
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Hi Pauline :)
These are individual short stories. You don't have to continue the previous story. Write about whatever you want ;) They're supposed to be exactly 50 words and can have a title up to 10 words. (optional)
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JW Hexaglot Senior Member United States youtube.com/user/egw Joined 6122 days ago 1802 posts - 2011 votes 22 sounds Speaks: English*, German, Spanish, Ancient Greek, French, Biblical Hebrew Studies: Luxembourgish, Dutch, Greek, Italian
| Message 7 of 43 15 May 2008 at 4:29am | IP Logged |
Correct
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