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Is this correct Russian?

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FokkerTISM
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20 November 2013 at 1:07pm | IP Logged 
Первое выступление российская группа «Гражданской Обороны» был в 1й новосибирский рок-фестиваль в 1987 года, над псевдоним «Адольф Гитлер».

I want it to mean "The first performance of the russian band Grazhdanskaya Oborona was held at the 1st Novosibirsk Rock Festival in 1987, under the pseudonym Adolf Hitler".
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Via Diva
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20 November 2013 at 1:33pm | IP Logged 
Первое выступление российской группы «Гражданская Оборона» было на 1-ом Новосибирском рок-фестивале в 1987 году под псевдонимом «Адольф Гитлер».

Fixed.
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taqseem
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20 November 2013 at 5:25pm | IP Logged 
imho БЫЛО можно заменить на ПРОШЛО
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Dominique01
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02 January 2014 at 2:32pm | IP Logged 
или СОСТОЯЛОСЬ
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FokkerTISM
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11 June 2014 at 7:53am | IP Logged 
I'd like to have the correctness of this phrase chaecked out:

Это было песня "Жар бог Шуга" от группа Алиса, написал во 1988-ом году, и песня о французская актриса Caroline Receveur. Благодаря, Нью-Йорк!

"This was the song "Zhar Bog Shuga" by the band Alisa, written in 1988 and the song is about the French actress Caroline Receveur. Thank you, New York!"
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Via Diva
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11 June 2014 at 8:42am | IP Logged 
Это была песня "Жар бог Шуга", написанная группой Алиса в 1988 о французской актрисе Caroline Receveur. Спасибо (Благодарю [тебя]), Нью-Йорк!


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