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| mo Newbie Korea, SouthRegistered users can see my Skype Name Joined 5879 days ago 7 posts - 7 votes Speaks: Korean* Studies: English | Message 1 of 3 24 August 2008 at 11:41pm | IP Logged | ||
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Hi I hope to lern the English writing.
I would write here daily topic or diary. But my writing is low level. So if you revised my writing, I would appreciate you. ============================================================ ========================= Topic: Olympic game is over Long time no see everyone!! How about your weekend? How do you do? Mr.yoon. You know what I study hard. You always not study English moreover you had slept every class was what? it's wrong? I dare speak to you Maybe you would get away Beijing due to watch Olympic game. Oh That's right!! what a concidence! you knew so many about it. yesterday, I had seen Olympic closing ceremony at 09:00 pm. The closing ceremony was magnificent and fancy and complicated because of so many people. during the game, due to so many interesting things,there are few things. you know what,untill next Olympic game, we would wait for 4 years Isn't it so long time? 1 person has voted this message useful | |||
| LuckyNomad Groupie Korea, South Joined 6290 days ago 79 posts - 89 votes  Speaks: English* Studies: Japanese, Korean | Message 2 of 3 25 August 2008 at 2:01am | IP Logged | ||
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모, 안녕 하세요? 저도 한국에서 살요.
Hi. I want to learn how to write English. My writing abilities are very low so I would appreciate it if you would correct my writing for me. Topic: The Olympic Games are over Long time no see everyone! 모씨는 세로은 회원 이스니까 이 문장이 조금 이상한 입니다. How was your weekend? How do you do Mr Yoon? "You know what I study hard." = You know how hard I study. "You always not study English moreover you had slept every class was what?" 아마도 이렇게 쓰고 싶었어요? You never study English and you always sleep in class. "it's wrong?" = Am I wrong? "I dare speak to you Maybe you would get away Beijing due to watch Olympic game." 전 이 문장을 이해 할수 없습니다. Oh That's right! What a concidence! "You knew so many about it." = You knew all about it. 또 You knew so much about it. "yesterday, I had seen Olympic closing ceremony at 09:00 pm." Yesterday, I saw the Olympic closing ceremony at 9:00 pm. "The closing ceremony was magnificent, fancy, and intricate because there were so many people involved." "you know what,untill next Olympic game, we would wait for 4 years Isn't it so long time? " = We have to wait 4 years for the next Olympic Games. It's such a long time, isn't it? Edited by LuckyNomad on 25 August 2008 at 2:04am 1 person has voted this message useful | |||
 Jiwon Triglot Moderator Korea, South Joined 6379 days ago 1417 posts - 1500 votes Speaks: EnglishC2, Korean*, GermanC1 Studies: Hindi, Spanish Personal Language Map | Message 3 of 3 25 August 2008 at 12:02pm | IP Logged | ||
This should be 모씨는 세로운 회원이니까 이 문장은 조금 이상합니다. It's really nice that you put time to correct his sentences.. But for some reason I sense that we are getting a few new Korean speakers trying to study English. Has this site been advertised on a Korean site or something? :) 1 person has voted this message useful |
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