awake Senior Member United States Joined 6476 days ago 406 posts - 438 votes ![](/images/pokal.2.jpg) ![](/images/pokal.2.jpg) Speaks: English* Studies: Esperanto, Spanish
| Message 25 of 28 08 July 2007 at 6:44pm | IP Logged |
I hope you won't mind a couple of quick corrections:
It should pro via mesagxo, not por. here pro means "for the the reason,
on account of"
Instead of A la fino, you should try something like "Je la fino"
Instead of devas tradukinta... you should have "devas esti tradukita"
Also English is "La angla(n) lingvo(n)" or just "la angla"
Lingvano should be lingvanto or probably even better parolanto
hope that's helpful :)
shyopstv wrote:
Day nineteen: (03/06/2007)
Dek-nauxa tago: (03/06/2007)
Dankon Lumulo por via mesagxo. Vi estas gxusta diri ke mi bezonas uzi
la lingvon pli ofte do nun mia ĵurnalo estos tradukinta al Esperanto. Mi
uzas la Reta Vortaro por
helpo kun iu vortoj
Mi jam menciis la Interretan kurson Esperanto ASAP. Gxi enhavas multajn
cxapitrojn. A la fino de cxiu cxapitro estas ekzerco kiu enhavas fraon kiu
devas tradukinta en English aux Esperanto. Mi faris ses ekzercojn.
Mi ankaux auxskultis alian epizodon de Radio Verda. Mi tre sxatas la
akcxento de la vira lingvano.
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shyopstv Groupie United Kingdom Joined 6560 days ago 86 posts - 91 votes ![](/images/pokal.2.jpg) 1 sounds Speaks: English* Studies: German, Esperanto
| Message 26 of 28 09 July 2007 at 2:39pm | IP Logged |
I don't mind corrections at all. I am still at a very low level when it comes to writing so any corrections would be great
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awake Senior Member United States Joined 6476 days ago 406 posts - 438 votes ![](/images/pokal.2.jpg) ![](/images/pokal.2.jpg) Speaks: English* Studies: Esperanto, Spanish
| Message 27 of 28 09 July 2007 at 7:15pm | IP Logged |
You're doing very well so far! :) If you keep up this pace I think you'll soon
be at a very high level. :)
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shyopstv Groupie United Kingdom Joined 6560 days ago 86 posts - 91 votes ![](/images/pokal.2.jpg) 1 sounds Speaks: English* Studies: German, Esperanto
| Message 28 of 28 14 July 2007 at 4:08pm | IP Logged |
Again I have not updated for a while. I have exams coming up towards the end of august so that has taken over lately and I am aiming towards one hour of studying a week.
Ree, mi ne ĝisdatigis pro tempo. Mi havas ekzamenojn je la fino de aŭgusto kaj ili estas mia unua antaŭeco. Mi nun celas studi unu horon ĉiutage
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